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Wednesday, November 27, 2013
another indie: Border Field Blues, by Corey Lynn Fayman
Create Space, 2012
my copy from the author - -thanks!
First -- epic-proportion sized apologies to the author & to his publicist for taking nearly a month to get this done, but sadly, I haven't had a whole lot of time because we remodeled our upstairs & I swear, it was just like moving in from scratch. But now we're all put together in time for the holidays, and it's back to reading business as usual. Finally! Word to the wise: if you're going to completely redo your home, think twice.
First, let me say this: I have no idea why this book hasn't been picked up by a regular publisher -- it's certainly good enough. This author can put together a good mystery that keeps you intrigued to the last page. The novel has a good noir tone to it, along with some funny moments, quirky characters and a twisty story. Border Field Blues is the second book in a series starting with Black's Beach Shuffle, which I thought I would read before this one but didn't get to. But I'll definitely pick up a copy now, and my understanding is that there is a third novel in the works.
Rolly Waters, guitarist, former band member, and now PI living in San Diego (my favorite city in CA), has been asked by his friend Max to look into who might be behind an act of destruction that left a Least Tern preserve near the border in shambles. Rolly is just a good guy whose circumstances haven't always been so great -- not a hardboiled kind of PI at all. As a cast of strange characters starts to become interested in what he's doing, he soon realizes that he's probably in way over his head as the case leads to not one, but possibly several murders. A CD left behind at the scene is one of the few clues he has, leading him to a bizarre woman who encourages voyeurs, a young guy who drives a hearse and has a skeleton pin pierced through his septum, a crazy guy in scrubs who has a thing about scalpels and some overly gung-ho members of the AFA, a sort of vigilante group that patrols the border with paint guns. The further he goes, the more he is warned off -- but he owes it to Max to find out what happened at the bird preserve so for him, quitting is not an option. Border Field Blues starts in the past, and it is to the past that Rolly will have to turn to figure out exactly what's going on here.
Aside from the few distracting typos, the only niggle I have is that sometimes the characters, although meant to be quirky, come off as a little too larger than life. The border guy, Nuge, for example, sounds like he was pulled right out of a movie. Otherwise, I really liked this one -- very unpredictable and twisty, number one; number two, the main character is very credible and realistic -- the hapless good guy who is just doing his job and gets sucked into something well beyond what he's been hired to do, and number three -- the setting is done so well -- I used to hike there, up past Monument Mesa, and the author's description of the whole area is spot on. If you forget the typos, this book is also much more polished in tone than the work of a lot of indie crime authors I've read, which made me wonder after finishing it why he hasn't been picked up by a more mainstream publisher. It's also funny at times, enough to break the tension here and there.
I want to address a point made by some other reviewers about this book re the video game. Some people have said it was murky, or left unexplained -- but I don't think these people read the story closely enough to get why the author included it. It fits, and fits well considering the character involved. I didn't find any loose ends in this book.
At the end of the day, the book 1) kept me reading to get to the root of what was going on, 2) had a good and twisty mystery with a satisfying conclusion, and 3) had a more polished tone than many crime novels I've read that have come from the big-name publishers. Cozy readers -- probably not for you. Hardboiled or really dark noir fans -- probably a bit on the lighter side of what you normally read. For me it had enough edginess, grit and crime to make it intriguing, mixed with odd characters that certainly kept things very lively.
again...my apologies for taking forever!
Tuesday, November 12, 2013
giveaways to US readers
For American readers, I have two books to give away. I accidentally forgot to decline my featured selection at the Mystery Guild book club, so these are book-club sized novels that I'm probably not going to read. They're not abridged, but just smaller in size.
#1 : Linda Fairstein's Death Angel, published earlier this year -- hardcover, never read.
#1 : Linda Fairstein's Death Angel, published earlier this year -- hardcover, never read.
#2 James Lee Burke's Light of the World, also published earlier this year ... again, a hardcover in its jacket, never read.
Seriously, all you have to do is to be the first to leave a comment that you want one or both of these, and they're yours. I will even pay postage!
Wednesday, November 6, 2013
The Reckless Engineer, by Jac Wright
Soul Mate Publishing, 2013
e-copy, provided by the author
On the scale of rare to hardly ever, once in a while I'll say yes to a previously-unknown (to me) author asking if I might read his or her work and post a review here, largely because I'm interested in seeing what he or she is offering that may be potentially new to the crime-fiction world. I'm not a writer, but I think I can understand how difficult it is for people who are and who are not in what I'd call "the big leagues" of crime-fiction writing to get their names out there. The Reckless Engineer is by Jac Wright, an author whose work I've never read before, and I was tempted to say yes because he's a UK writer. The book is a murder mystery that takes place in Portsmouth, offering a wide range of suspects in the death of a bitchy and witchy engineer's mistress. The main suspect is her lover Jack, who may be a total jerk who doesn't seem the type to have a propensity for murder in his blood. There is a lot of action in this novel as his friend Jeremy tries to prove that Jack didn't do it, there's a fair amount of subterfuge and untrustworthy characters, and well, as one reviewer put it, it has "everything-but-the-kitchen-sink."
When Jack Connor's current lover is killed (and I say current because Jack has a habit of sleeping around despite the fact that he's married), all signs point to Jack as her murderer. He has a lot to lose besides his reputation: he's married to Caitlin, the daughter of a rich and powerful industrialist whose money makes it possible for Jack to live a good life. Jack immediately calls best friend Jeremy, who gets his attorney Harry to take Jack's case. As the legal process swings into high gear, Jeremy overhears a phone conversation between Caitlin and an unknown person named K.C., and starts to wonder if it's possible that Caitlin may have had something to do with Michelle's death. After all, both she and her father knew about Jack's little bit on the side, and Caitlin is a perfect suspect. The conversation sparks Jeremy to do an investigation on his own while Jack's fate hangs in the balance, but soon he realizes that there were a lot more people who may have wanted to get rid of the dead woman. He certainly has his work cut out for him.
It's a plot directly up my alley, and the choice of murder weapon (a box of poisoned chocolates) is intriguing, since really, anyone could have left it for the dead woman at any time, opening up the possibilities of more than a single suspect. This approach is always a plus in my mind, probably hearkening back to my love affair with Agatha Christie and the way she set up her novels so that you have to wait until the end to find out the who. The action starts quickly, getting the reader involved at the outset as the author doesn't wait long at all to start planting seeds of doubt about Jack's involvement. At the same time, I had a number of issues with this novel that made it a sloggy go in some parts. First is the author's use of language. As a single example, there are a number of times that he uses the word "shall" in dialogue between characters that comes across as stilted and unrealistic in context. Second, there's so much exposition in this story that could have been better applied, woven into normal conversation so that the background info comes out more naturally. But my biggest objection is as follows: while I won't reveal the ending, I thought that Mr. Wright made a very crucial error here, waiting until the last few chapters to provide background and detail on the murderer. I mean, the information about the killer should have been established more evenly throughout the book rather than piling it all on at the end, because then, duh, you know who the killer is before you get to the big reveal. I was so disappointed! To his credit, the author does keep you guessing up until that point, but I've never ever seen this kind of thing done before, and I've been reading crime fiction since before I was a teen. He might as well have put up a neon arrow pointing to the killer at that point.
The plot's introduction was quite well done (other than the use of the word "shall" so many times), the middle was very tough going due to the introduction of so many new characters and plot points, and then it picks up again toward the end. But once I got back into the groove of the read after the sloggy center and wanted to know the identity of the killer, with the above-mentioned error, things were kind of wrecked for me, although I will say that the actual "how" the murder was done was pretty ingenious. Finally, in my opinion, and really, I don't suppose that means much to anyone but myself, if someone is going to write crime fiction, it needs to be very tight in terms of plot, and especially in how the author controls the scene, the characters, and the denouement. I didn't find that here -- there were always some new angles thrown in, which is okay, but there should be some sort of subtle clue at the beginning as to where the author is going to take his readers. There is just way too much going on here to make the novel really pop, which is a shame, since the story itself has a lot of potential.
Personally speaking, I'd certainly give this author another try, especially if he takes tighter control over his work in the future. The book could have frankly benefited from more judicious editing, but he can weave a good yarn that is interesting enough at its core to keep you reading. Then again, I'm super picky when it comes to crime, since I've spent so much of my reading life glued to murder mysteries, and I consider myself a tough audience.
My many thanks to the author for the opportunity to read his work.
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